I’d lost words
But with keen intent
In each breath,
Paroxysms of purpose
Direct gusts of wind,
Form and feeling,
Gaging, voicing, signing,
Gist in sagacity’s ardour
I dare not end this
Sentence for thirst of its sense
Until breathless still.
Antonia Sara Zenkevitch
(A Shadorma, Cinquain, and Senryu inspired by prompt words ‘meaning’ and ‘passion’ given by Colleen Chesebro’s #Tanka Tuesday Challenge )
My favorite line: I dare not end this…
Very nice! I love the way the forms fit together. This blog theme is especially lovely as it keeps the image in place on the left of your poetry. Really stunning! ❤
Thank you Colleen, and thanks again for the inspiration and the intrduction to the different forms. 🙂
You’re welcome. ❤
Very well done 💜
I love this, using the different form together. Well done.
You really lay with words, very nice!
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