Deeper (tanka #writephoto)

pelt in the dark stream,

its chiming distance muting

nadirs and zeniths,

I choose the bright apices

by gravities’ granite lip.

Antonia Sara Zenkevitch

For visually challenged writers, the image shows a sheer drop from old stone… a bridge, perhaps, or the battlements of a castle… there is no way to tell… Below is deep, dark water, swirling, fringed by autumnal trees… credit Sue Vincent.

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  1. Sue Vincent says:

    Very evocative use of language, Antonia.

    1. antoniazen says:

      Thank you, Sue. I hope you have a good weekend, take care.

      1. Sue Vincent says:

        Thanks, Antonia. You too x

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