blue eons observe
lone silence’s ire,
in it yells a curse
to rile oceans;
to rouse bile in us,
yet envoys arise
to yearn,
to learn
in soul’s urn
obverse to ruin;
converse orations
annul bribes;
no absolutions
in love’s alibis
yet our orisons
vault bliss;
collide in visions
sincere in resolve;
a true universe;
entire, uncut,
never inert
or in stasis,
you or I slivers
silver lit
in traverse,
stories yet alive
to salve cruel burns;
cast out evil lies,
see Venus return
to bees in our vines,
olive coronets
revel in roots,
our noetics
seal routes
in scent or soil;
in verbs or toil
our vital essence
calls you
as trees bore oil,
Our brass
belies nerves to uncoil;
in reverence,
to all,
our voices run
invisible
as neroli conveys
sun traces
in one caress;
rebellious air obeys
a verse unseen,
no less,
a sense in us
lasts
via nouns,
or sundry acts;
in vast cultures’
obscure ancestry
are our
ears, eyes, body;
our novels
never absence
stars once bore,
one star in us
unreels to lionise,
yes, core, tales, bone,
by you, I live on.
Antonia Sara Zenkevitch
This is the second of two responses to VJ’s Weekly Challenge, this week the theme was resilience but we were asked not to use the word directly in our creative efforts. My first, more personal response can be read here.
Each line of this poem is a partial anagram of the phrase ‘but to say you believe in our resilience’, which is harder than it sounds. Trying to write with no use of ‘d’, ‘g’, ‘h’, ‘p’, ‘m’ etc. and a maximum of one ‘a’, one ‘t’, one ‘c’ per line was particularly challenging. So was limiting the use of ‘s’, ‘b’, ‘r’ and ‘l’ to a maximum of two per line. Finding rhymes or rhythms in anagrams was interesting, the latter partly defined by the need to structure lines so letters aren’t repeated too often while trying to make sure the flow is retained. I recommend using partial anagrams of a phrase to create poetry as an exercise; whatever the results, it really gets you thinking about words and how we use them.

This is so rich with imagery – requires more than one read. I love that your voice is so strong, each line packing a punch, asserting your presence.
Thanks, this was a difficult one because I challenged myself to use only parial anagrams so had limited letters to use. I love that you read me asserting my presence in each line! Thanks as always for your inspiration.
So welcome.
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